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Writing sample 6 --  Band 8


Topic :  benefits & drawbacks of the Internet



The Internet has brought about many changes into our day to day life. Nowadays we are doing mailing, contacting, banking and communication much faster.  Do these developments have more advantages than disadvantages?



      The Internet has transformed people's lives, it has changed the way we communicate with each other, transact business and access information.  Although the Internet has both positive and negative aspects, I believe that its merits outweigh its demerits.



      To begin with, thanks to the Internet, people can now contact their friends, families and colleagues faster and more efficiently than in the past. Most individuals have internet connection on their mobiles or computers, as a result, they can always stay contacted with their near and dear ones.  For example, social networking applications like Facebook and Twitter allow residents to share important information. Similarly, technologies like video conferencing and webinars enable people to participate in online conferencing, which eliminate the need to travel to other cities or countries for attending such programs.



      Additionally, online shopping and banking have saved people a great deal of time and effort.  Consumers today can buy electronics and household appliances from online sites such as Amazon and eBay, then their orders will be delivered at home directly. Moreover, transferring and withdrawing money become very easy today with online facilities offered by most banks.


      In contrast, many offensive and obscene content is available on the web and children have easy access to them. These antisocial elements and violent factors can have detrimental influences on youngsters. Furthermore, the Internet addiction is another problem.  A great deal of teenagers are fascinated by social media or online games that they waste numerous time and energy, which can negatively affect their academic performance and interpersonal relationships.


      In conclusion, the Internet has greatly benefited people in a variety of ways.  Although it has some drawbacks, it can be handled effectively by implementing proper regulations and through parental supervision.

   

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Topic 2 --- Reduce crime


Topic 3 --- Allocate higher positions to female employees

Topic 4- Choosing employees by job interviews

Topic 5 -- mixed-gender school  VS.  separate school

Topic 6 -- benefits & drawbacks of the Internet



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雅思写作 地道高分短语 30天攻克计划


Lecture 1 ------- Environment

Lecture 2 ------ Government

Lecture 3 ------ Education

Lecture 4 ---- Health

lecture 5 --- Science & Technology


Lecture 6 ----- Media


Lecture 7 ----Traffic & Transport

Lecture 8 ----- Work



SummerLin 最后编辑于 2020-08-08 19:21:25

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