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    Writing Sample 7 --- Band 8.5


      Topic :  should government spend money on international aid?


      Some people believe that the government should not spend money on international aid when they have their own disadvantaged people like homeless and unemployed.  To what extent do you agree or disagree?



      Over the last 100 years, population has grown at an exponential rate across many countries in the world. This brings along with it its own problems such as poverty, illiteracy, unemployment and so on. Many governments allocate huge resources to tackle these problems. Since all governments have problems to solve in their own countries, I agree with the argument that their first priority should be their own people.


        There are ample reasons why I believe that the government should put the welfare of its own people ahead of others. To begin with, financial resources are becoming scarce and many countries are already in debt. These funds must be reserved for the development and maintenance of its own institutions and social security measures such as free health care and shelters for homeless people. Secondly, such welfare schemes not only elevate people out of poverty; they also help the government indirectly by creating jobs. This, in turn, facilitates the economic growth of the country.



        On the other hand, it is understandable and reasonable to donate money to the poorer nations as a gesture of basic human decency and humanity. No nation, after all, can live in prosperity when its neighbors are struggling with poverty. By offering financial assistance to their poor neighbors, countries can also put a curb on illegal immigration. Even so, in my opinion, solving problems in ones own country is more important than venturing to help others. Others should be helped only when the donating country has a surplus of money

and resources.



        In conclusion, there are obvious benefits for the government in the long run from donating money as relief aids to many foreign countries. However, I strongly iterate that the government must first improve the economic, financial and employment prospects of its own people before embarking on humanitarian work abroad.

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Lecture 1 ------- Environment

Lecture 2 ------ Government

Lecture 3 ------ Education

Lecture 4 ---- Health

lecture 5 --- Science & Technology


Lecture 6 ----- Media

Lecture 7 ----Traffic & Transport

Lecture 8 ----- Work




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