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雅思写作高分范文computers

电脑是让我们的生活变得更加容易了,还是更加复杂了呢?”来学习这篇 native speaker 范文。



题目:



These days, computers seem to be everywhere. Almost everything we do somehow involves the use of a computerized or automated system. Some people are grateful for this, while others feel they are being left behind as technology takes over.

Have computers made our lives easier, or has the world become too complicated?



范文:



The modern world seems to be run by machines. While some people worry the world has become too complex, others feel life has become simpler, letting us do more in less time. Personally, I find that automation has indeed simplified certain aspects of modern life, though this is not so for everyone.



Before computers came along, tasks we take for granted and that require mere seconds to complete today used to occupy much of our time and cost us a lot. We spent more time adding up our bills every month, or looking up words in a dictionary to check their spelling. Correspondences took weeks, phone calls to relatives overseas were expensive and often unclear, and travel was a guessing game. Today, the entire world is at our fingertips; we can communicate with anyone instantly, anywhere, at any time, and for free. Computers do our adding for us, check our writing, and allow us to make sure the weather is going to be agreeable when we go someplace for vacation.



However, not everyone has benefited from these advancements. While digital natives, those born into the digital world, have no problem keeping up with its almost daily changes, baby- boomers recall the days when they would write letters to a friend or a lover by hand and then wait impatiently for a reply. Instead, these people must now spend their time learning new programs, keep up with password change requests, or spend hours on the phone with Technical Support so they can get back on Skype because that is the only chance they get to see their grandkids. To them it might seem that the world is quickly spinning on while they lag behind.


In conclusion, it would be easy to say that life has become easier thanks to computers. However, it will take a few more generations for this idea to be a more common opinion.




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越来越多的人开始通过电脑在家里工作,越来越多的企业也鼓励这种做法。原因是什么?好处有哪些呢?



题目:

More and more people are choosing to work from home via computer. Companies are increasingly allowing their employees to do so. What might be some causes of this development?  What are the benefits of doing this?




范文:



Technology has changed the way we work in many ways, with a notable example being the increase in the frequency of people using the internet to telecommute to work and number of employers that support it. Though many reasons exist for this trend, the most likely are the costs and stress of travel. As this essay will demonstrate, reducing these factors can be advantageous for both parties.



From the employee’s perspective, commuting to work has several disadvantages. Aside from wasting valuable time driving a car or even boarding a train during the morning and evening rush hours, the financial costs can add up to a significant amount. For a driver, expenditures on gas, vehicle maintenance, insurance, and other incidentals can all be eliminated by simply staying at home. On a more personal level, many people find the drive to work highly stressful, especially when dealing with gridlock, road rage, exhaust fumes, and other travel horrors. Working online, conversely, allows an employee to be relaxed and focused on the work at hand. Thus, it is not surprising that more and more people are opting for this.




As for the employer, a happy worker is an effective worker. In other words, allowing staff members to work from home not only increases their productivity, but it also lessens the likelihood of their taking sick days due to a build-up of stress. Moreover, as many modern companies subsidize employees’ travel expenses, these savings can benefit their bottom line significantly. On a broader scope, many corporations wishing to attract a new generation of customers can also promote the fact that by encouraging telecommuting they are actually contributing to helping the environment by reducing the level of toxic emissions on city highways.




In conclusion, working from home is a growing phenomenon owing to the benefits it provides both employees and employers, such as reduced travel costs, increased productivity, and even environmental responsibility.





全部资料汇总在此 雅思备考资料汇总 ^_^


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单项分类~~ 雅思资料链接:




雅思口语 实用表达  ^_^



喜好类话题  必备词汇+ 例句30句


考场应急  实用短语+句型1


考场救急  实用句型2


应试口语提分策略1

应试口语提分策略2

雅思口语提分 地道词汇表达(上)

雅思口语提分 地道词汇表达(下)


口语和写作 如何积累素材 & 观点库?





写作  ^_^

雅思写作 ~~ 两篇高分范文


写完雅思作文,该如何自我检查和批改呢?


雅思写作 ~~ 解决问题类 作文


雅思IELTS A类
图表题--线形图 & 柱状图(1)


A类小作文之--扇形图、流程图、表格及图形题


雅思IELTS G类书信词汇及模板句型


找工作必备---英文简历词汇


雅思IELTS G类书信词汇及模板句型


雅思IELTS  写作 -- 实用模板句型 50句(上)


雅思IELTS 写作 -- 实用模板句型 50句 (下)





雅思写作  8-9分 范文  ^_^



Topic 1--- working from home


Topic 2 --- Reduce crime


Topic 3 --- Allocate higher positions to female employees

Topic 4- Choosing employees by job interviews



Topic 5 -- mixed-gender school  VS.  separate school

Topic 6 -- benefits & drawbacks of the Internet


Topic 7-- spend money on international aid or on own people?




听力  ^_^



听力题中如何快速破解干扰项?


哪些练习方法能让听力突破8分?


雅思听力 常见信号词


Matching 配对题  解题策略

听力快速提分(1)

听力快速提分 (2)




剑桥雅思真题  ^_^


剑桥雅思 15  真题+ 听力音频


剑桥雅思 14(真题+音频 )A类+G类




阅读  ^_^



阅读中 同义替换的运用和解题技巧


阅读快速提分 Lecture (1)--填空题

阅读快速提分 Lecture (2) T / F /NG题


阅读快速提分 Lecture (3)--Matching 题

阅读如何得高分 Lecture (4)--选择题


阅读快速突破高分 Lecture (5)-- Heading题

阅读中如何突破 Heading 题


阅读如何短期提速提分?




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雅思写作 地道高分短语 30天攻克计划


Lecture 1 ------- Environment


Lecture 2 ------ Government


Lecture 3 ------ Education



Lecture 4 ---- Health

lecture 5 --- Science & Technology


Lecture 6 ----- Media


Lecture 7 ----Traffic & Transport


Lecture 8 ----- Work







SummerLin 最后编辑于 2020-11-22 12:55:44

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