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雅思写作和思培写作，同学会有一个疑问：
为什么我的雅思写作IELTS上不了7分，思培写作CELPIP上不了9分？ 如果同学写作能做到以下三个点，那就没问题。 第一个点：连接词。 一般同学的写作如下：My hometown is Shanghai. It is a very beautiful city in South China. If you live there, it is amazing. You can do whatever you want. I love living there. 我们会发现同学的写作都缺乏连接词的。当我们加上连接词之后，就不一样了。如改： My hometown is Shanghai. As a matter of fact, it is a very beautiful city in South China. If you live there, it is amazing. You can do whatever you want. Therefore, I love living there. 第二个点：高级句型。 句型总共有四个等级, 至少同学的要写到第二和三个等级。 level 1 简单句 I eat apples. level 2 并列句 I eat apples, and Tom drinks milk. level 3 复杂句 I eat apples, which are delicious. level 4 并列复杂句 Tom drinks milk, and I eat apples, which are delicious. 一般同学的写作如下：My hometown is Shanghai. It is a very beautiful city in South China. If you live there, it is amazing. You can do whatever you want. I love living there. 当我们加上句型之后，就不一样了。如改： My hometown is Shanghai which is a very beautiful city in South China.(level 3句型) If you live there, it is amazing, because you can do whatever you want.(level 2 句型） 第三个点：高级单词 一般同学喜欢用的单词，very, really, so, quite 等，不建议同学写到雅思写作和思培写作当中, 建议改成extremely, significantly, tremendously. 如： It is a very beautiful city in South China. 改：It is a significantly beautiful city in South China. 当然，不能用的单词还有：good, bad, it can help sb. do sth. it can make sb. do sth. it can let sb. do sth. 等 我们写作学习的时候，要掌握这些基础单词的高级单词有哪一些，要看老师的整理了。同学写作应该focus的是这三个点，不只是内容要高大上。 聯繫人：Alan Cho(在校雅思/思培老師) 微信： alancho0423(粵/國/英語) 电话：6048331423 （平时上课，请添加微信）  |
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alancho 最后编辑于 2020-10-27 16:13:47 |
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